Michael J Miron
(Submitted by mmiron on Sun, 08/23/2009 - 20:39)
Specific Feedback Requested:
Is the format correct
is the Resume specific enough
- ‹ previous
- 25 of 69
- next ›
Resume Feedback

I agree with bobmartin, and
I agree with bobmartin, and would add the following:
Perhaps you could add a statement of your goals and objectives - what kind of job you are looking for now.
I would give the dates of your earlier experience too.
Add your formal education, assuming you have college.
Hello - My first thought is
Hello - My first thought is it's a little dense. As a hiring manager with limited attention span and many resumes to review, as bad as it sounds, this resume looks like a lot of reading... On the pro experience section, I would shorten the intro's and then knock each down to 5 bullets. Then maybe you could add a section for areas of expertise where you list skills and then how you used them rather than just a list of areas of expertise at the top. Hope this helps!