Non Profit Management
(Submitted by sdun5298 on Fri, 10/09/2009 - 14:00)
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This is an excellent
This is an excellent resume.
Just a few comments.
Your opening lines describing yourself are very dense. I had to reread them to get their sense. Can you express these qualities more conversationally?
Perhaps you could make a statement as to what your present objectives are - what sort of position you are looking for now.
Finally, I don't know what "Stephen Minister" is. Can you elaborate?
Good Luck to you.