DIANA LACQUEMENT
(Submitted by dlacquement on Wed, 10/21/2009 - 19:16)
Specific Feedback Requested:
I would appreciate feedback on how my resume reads, if there are keywords that would make my resume stand out for potential employers. Also, is the layout okay?
Thank you in advance,
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I would start with a
I would start with a statement of what positions you are suited for/looking for.
"Applications" are usually down near the bottom, not the first thing.
Avoid phrases like "Expansive thinker ..." Tell what you've done/what you can do in detail
Under "Prof Exp" finish the name St. Jude Medical what? And give the entire time there. Then break it into the 2 areas.
In your work descriptions, watch your tenses - keep them the same.
Under "Education", give us a little more: when, any degree/certificate, any other courses; give community work, if any.
Best of luck to you!